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Monday, 27 August 2018

Eating junk food-by Aleenah

Eating junk food
Learning Intention:We are learning to write a Persuasive writing.
Success Criteria:I know I am successful when I can persuade my reader about my story.

Image result for junk foodJunk food is bad for our body. It is full of sugar. You can get diabetes. They make you fat and your teeth will rot. Junk food doesn't give you vitamins. Fruits and vegetables are better than Junk food.

Monday, 20 August 2018

All about me-by Aleenah

All about me
Learning Intention:We are learning to write a recount.
Success Criteria:I know I am successful when I can write a recount about myself.

Hello! My name is Aleenah and I moved to New Zealand last year. I study at a school in Panmure. I was born in the month of March in the Philippines. I have 3 friends Asinate, Brielle and Deva. I love to play the Sims and Minecraft. My favourite sport is badminton . I love eating noodles and churros and I hate eating vegetables.

I  hate maths . Sometimes I don't like my siblings because they don't share their things to me. Colouring is my least favourite thing to do. Sometimes I don't like playing soccer because I keep fooling around and it hurts my feelings. 

Thursday, 9 August 2018

Fortune the shy rat-by Aleenah

Fortune the shy rat
Learning Intention:We are learning to write a narrative story.
Success Criteria: know I am successful when I can write a narrative story using capital letters and full stops correctly in a paragraph form.

Fortune was very shy. He didn't have any rat friends, he even got bullied because of his shyness. 


Image result for ratOne day Fortune was out in the garden looking for something to play with, when he heard a strange sound outside the fence. Fortune crept to the fence and peeked through a small hole. He saw a rat trapped inside a cage and 2 rats that looked like they were guarding the cage. Fortune thought he would save that rat.

Fortune waited until sundown. He plan to save the t
rapped rat. Fortune had a costume that looked exactly like what the other guards wore. He walked towards the guards and told them he was their boss. He asked for the keys and the guard rats trusted him. Fortune waited for the bad rats to leave. He opened the cage and let the rat out. Fortune quickly called the rat police. 
The mean, stinky rats were captured.

The following day Fortune became popular because he saved a famous rat. Fortune was happy and he was not a shy rat anymore.

Thursday, 2 August 2018

Isabelle the hippo-by Aleenah

Isabelle the hippo
Learning Intention:We are learning to write a narrative story.
Success Criteria: I know I am successful when I can write a narrative story using capital letters and full stops correctly and in paragraph form.

Image result for happy hippoIsabelle was a fat, grey hippo. Isabelle loves dancing. Every time her parents were not at the river she would dance her heart out.

One evening Isabelle cannot sleep. She received a letter from Birdie the mail bird. She opened the letter but before she could read any words, a group of people injected her with a sleeping drug. She fell down and passed out. The group dragged Isabelle behind an enormous tree.  

Later, Isabelle's parents went to look for her. They couldn't find her, so they called an old wise hippo and started to look for her. They found Isabelle as well as the group that caught her. The group were punished by the strong hippos and Isabelle's family was happy to have her back.

Thursday, 7 June 2018

A visit to the stone cottage-by Aleenah


Learning Intention:W.A.L.T-write a recount.
Success Criteria:I know I am successful when I can write a recount using adjectives.


Do you know what is a clothes ringer? Today Room 6 went to the stone cottage of the fencibles. Inside I saw a clothes ringer and I asked Cris what is it, He said it was like a washing machine but very different. The Fencibles use to wash their clothes in it. It has two long rolls and at the side there was a lever and you have to turn it around many times to make it work.

Monday, 21 May 2018

My Autobiography-by Aleenah

Aleenah
Learning Intention:We are learning to write our autobiography.
Success Criteria:I know I am successful when I can write my autobiography and use adjectives and group my sentences into paragraphs.

Aleenah is my name. I am 9 yrs old. March 2009 is my birthday. My loving parents are Agnes and Aniceto. My handsome brother is Amiel and my pretty sister is Athea. I also have many uncles and aunties. Nine tall uncles and five pretty aunties.

Prima, Hensio, Agapita and Dandilo are my old grandparents. Too much Poo and Geronimo Stilton are my favourite books. They are very funny books. I love playing badminton and football, that's why they are my favourite sports.


I am not interested on listening to music, so I don't have a favourite song. I like story writing because its fun writing stories, poems and more. Again, I don't have a favourite TV program. Asinate,Brielle and Deva are my beautiful friends. I love eating churros because there is chocolate on the top and its my favourite.