Mission day-by Aleenah

Mission Day

Learning Intention:We are learning to write a recount.

Success Criteria:I know I am successful when I can write a recount using capital letters, full stops and in paragraph form correctly.

I am excited! Today is the day we can play games, wear mufti clothes and more. 

It was time to celebrate our amazing day. I bought a raffle ticket for a Lego Ninjago set. It has so many details. The part I like was the vehicle. It was so mean and cool.

Next I bought a cola drink. It cost $1. Then I gave all my money to my brother and walk around and sit down under the trees to relax. That was very nice to have a relaxing day.

When the celebration was over and it was time for lunch. I had a sausage sizzle. It was so yummy especially with the ketchup on it. It was so delicious that I wanted another one. I ate it so fast. I have to clean my mess because their are crumbs on the carpet.

Lastly we watched a movie called Despicable  Me 3.I liked how the Minions talked. It was very funny.

My terrific time with grandma- by Aleenah

My wonderful time with my grandma

Learning Intention:We are learning to write a recount.

Success Criteria:I know I am successful when I can write a recount about my time with grandma.

When did you had a happy time with your grandma?

It all started when my family and I decided to visit my grandma in my dad's side. When we arrived, my grandma and I walked by the beach and we talked. We also sang songs that she liked. It took me awhile to learn the songs but it was actually fun learning new things. I liked it a lot.

After that we built a sand castle using an empty coke bottle. We just cut off the top part and added sand on the bottom piece. We decorated it with sea shells and sticks. It was amazing with the white and purple sea shells. Then we sat next to it and talked. 

We did many more cool things but it was time to leave. I said "bye" to my grandma and left.

All about me-by Aleenah

All about me

Learning Intention:We are learning to write a recount.

Success Criteria:I know I am successful when I can write a recount about myself.

Hello! My name is Aleenah and I moved to New Zealand last year. I study at a school in Panmure. I was born in the month of March in the Philippines. I have 3 friends Asinate, Brielle and Deva. I love to play the Sims and Minecraft. My favourite sport is badminton . I love eating noodles and churros and I hate eating vegetables.

I  hate maths . Sometimes I don't like my siblings because they don't share their things to me. Colouring is my least favourite thing to do. Sometimes I don't like playing soccer because I keep fooling around and it hurts my feelings. 

Stormwater drain-Aleenah

 Learning Intention:W.A.L.T write a recount.

  Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write my story in order, and use capital letters and full stops correctly.
                                           

If it rains the water flows in the road and it goes into the storm water drain.When the rain is inside the drain  there is a very big pipe where the water flows all the way to the sea. If all rubbish from the road flows inside the drain it will go to the sea too. If the rubbish goes to the sea all of the fishes might die and we can't go fishing anymore.
There is a very important rule:Do not put rubbish in the drain so the water will not be polluted and kill the living things in thewater.

The day I saved Emily- by Aleenah

 

Learning Intention:W.A.L.T-write a recount.
Success Criteria:I know I can do this when I write my story in order and use capital letters and full stops correctly.

Last Monday down by the river I was fishing with my sister Athea. We heard a loud scream.A little girl was in  the cold water. Her name was Emily and she was shouting for help. Her mum was shouting for help as well. 
Me and my sister got a long rope and we pulled her out using the rope.Me and my sister had our clothes on and we were shivering  because we got wet and the water was cold. Emily was shivering badly because she was soaked. After wards Emily's mum said ''Thanks".