The day I saved Emily- by Aleenah

 

Learning Intention:W.A.L.T-write a recount.
Success Criteria:I know I can do this when I write my story in order and use capital letters and full stops correctly.

Last Monday down by the river I was fishing with my sister Athea. We heard a loud scream.A little girl was in  the cold water. Her name was Emily and she was shouting for help. Her mum was shouting for help as well. 
Me and my sister got a long rope and we pulled her out using the rope.Me and my sister had our clothes on and we were shivering  because we got wet and the water was cold. Emily was shivering badly because she was soaked. After wards Emily's mum said ''Thanks".