Fortune the shy rat-by Aleenah

Fortune the shy rat

Learning Intention:We are learning to write a narrative story.
Success Criteria: know I am successful when I can write a narrative story using capital letters and full stops correctly in a paragraph form.

Fortune was very shy. He didn't have any rat friends, he even got bullied because of his shyness. 

One day Fortune was out in the garden looking for something to play with, when he heard a strange sound outside the fence. Fortune crept to the fence and peeked through a small hole. He saw a rat trapped inside a cage and 2 rats that looked like they were guarding the cage. Fortune thought he would save that rat.

Fortune waited until sundown. He plan to save the trapped rat. Fortune had a costume that looked exactly like what the other guards wore. He walked towards the guards and told them he was their boss. He asked for the keys and the guard rats trusted him. Fortune waited for the bad rats to leave. He opened the cage and let the rat out. Fortune quickly called the rat police. 
The mean, stinky rats were captured.

The following day Fortune became popular because he saved a famous rat. Fortune was happy and he was not a shy rat anymore.