Warsaw and his friend - By Aleenah

Warsaw and his friend

Learning Intention:We are learning to write a narrative story.

Success Criteria:I know I am successful when I can write a narrative writing using adjectives, capital letters and full stops correctly.

Once upon a time, in a beautiful tree filled forest, lived an enormous, bright green, purple fire breathing dragon named "Warsaw". He was lonely because people thought he was ugly and scary.
Everyone thought that he was like that except for one girl. 

The girl was walking with her parents when she met Warsaw. Warsaw had a sad face and was about to run away when the girl asked him to stop and asked his name. They kept on talking until they became best of friends. 

One day Warsaw was walking in a dark forest when he step on a trap. He was stuck and started to breath fire. He couldn't brake the metal because it was too strong. 

The girl saw the fire in the forest so she asked her parents if they could investigate. They arrived at the location and they saw Warsaw. The girl was very happy to see Warsaw. Then two guys went up to them and they hit the girl and her parents. Luckily Bat girl came and hit the two guys. They were knocked out and the girl's parents called the police and the two men got arrested. 

The girl thanked Bat girl and Warsaw was free. Everyone was happy. 

My terrific time with grandma- by Aleenah

My wonderful time with my grandma

Learning Intention:We are learning to write a recount.

Success Criteria:I know I am successful when I can write a recount about my time with grandma.

When did you had a happy time with your grandma?

It all started when my family and I decided to visit my grandma in my dad's side. When we arrived, my grandma and I walked by the beach and we talked. We also sang songs that she liked. It took me awhile to learn the songs but it was actually fun learning new things. I liked it a lot.

After that we built a sand castle using an empty coke bottle. We just cut off the top part and added sand on the bottom piece. We decorated it with sea shells and sticks. It was amazing with the white and purple sea shells. Then we sat next to it and talked. 

We did many more cool things but it was time to leave. I said "bye" to my grandma and left.

Do we need to celebrate Mission day or not? - By Aleenah

Do we need to celebrate Mission day or not?

Learning Intention:We are learning to write a Persuasive writing.

Success Criteria:I know I am successful when I can persuade someone to believe my point of view.

I definitely agree that we should celebrate Mission day because we have loads of fun. You may think that we are wasting money but we are actually helping other children. We fund raise and we donated it to the "Holy Angels Orphanage" in India.

We play games and we win prizes. We also learn how to persuade people to visit each class activity. Every student had a turn to look after the money that we raised, and give it to the person who is in charge in the office.

I had so much fun that I want it to happen everyday.