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Tuesday 30 October 2018

Warsaw and his friend - By Aleenah

Warsaw and his friend
Learning Intention:We are learning to write a narrative story.
Success Criteria:I know I am successful when I can write a narrative writing using adjectives, capital letters and full stops correctly.
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Once upon a time, in a beautiful tree filled forest, lived an enormous, bright green, purple fire breathing dragon named "Warsaw". He was lonely because people thought he was ugly and scary.
Everyone thought that he was like that except for one girl. 

The girl was walking with her parents when she met Warsaw. Warsaw had a sad face and was about to run away when the girl asked him to stop and asked his name. They kept on talking until they became best of friends. 

One day Warsaw was walking in a dark forest when he step on a trap. He was stuck and started to breath fire. He couldn't brake the metal because it was too strong. 

The girl saw the fire in the forest so she asked her parents if they could investigate. They arrived at the location and they saw Warsaw. The girl was very happy to see Warsaw. Then two guys went up to them and they hit the girl and her parents. Luckily Bat girl came and hit the two guys. They were knocked out and the girl's parents called the police and the two men got arrested. 

The girl thanked Bat girl and Warsaw was free. Everyone was happy. 

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