You did a fantastic job describing what it would feel like if you were on the moon. I love the way you use rhyme. Very creative! :)
I really liked the colour and image you used to present your poem. Ka pai!
I have often thought about what it would be like to travel into space. I think if I had the opportunity to go there, I would probably stay because I'd miss my friends and family so much! Neil Armstrong was so brave going to the moon.
If you had the opportunity, would you go to the moon? I think the view would be phenomenal!
Kia ora Aleenah,
ReplyDeleteYou did a fantastic job describing what it would feel like if you were on the moon. I love the way you use rhyme. Very creative! :)
I really liked the colour and image you used to present your poem. Ka pai!
I have often thought about what it would be like to travel into space. I think if I had the opportunity to go there, I would probably stay because I'd miss my friends and family so much! Neil Armstrong was so brave going to the moon.
If you had the opportunity, would you go to the moon? I think the view would be phenomenal!
Noho ora mai
Erica